tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6408005209109774396.post8823951519692922733..comments2010-11-15T17:10:45.667-08:00Comments on HLMei (:: Happiness In EducationHui Ling Meihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11731989518321317393noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6408005209109774396.post-91861204146188062842010-10-12T12:32:10.868-07:002010-10-12T12:32:10.868-07:00Hey Hui Ling,
I found your blog to be very interes...Hey Hui Ling,<br />I found your blog to be very interesting, i like the way you support your theses in connecting it to your life. Try to focus on your grammar, I suggest to proof read! Trust me it help a lot! <br />Good job Hui Ling :)adrienne nevarezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11044443148868128450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6408005209109774396.post-20544266320014028342010-10-10T11:26:47.971-07:002010-10-10T11:26:47.971-07:00Very interesting Hui Ling! I think you did a very...Very interesting Hui Ling! I think you did a very nice job. Just continue to revise and look for places you can "smooth" out the prose.Dr. E. McCormickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04644671190330730126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6408005209109774396.post-29926367739436729352010-10-07T11:27:48.711-07:002010-10-07T11:27:48.711-07:00There was some weird technical problems going on. ...There was some weird technical problems going on. It is suppose to be 2 paragraphs and I fixed it.<br /><br />I will come looking for you when I need help with chemistry,thanks.Hui Ling Meihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11731989518321317393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6408005209109774396.post-9862850995383258992010-10-07T09:17:27.675-07:002010-10-07T09:17:27.675-07:00Hello, I am Lin, and I am sitting next to you righ...Hello, I am Lin, and I am sitting next to you right now and commenting on your blog. You make your blog entry on time. Congratulation! Bt the way, I make mine on time, too. I read the entry, and I find out something. You don't like the chemistry, and you are worried about the test and projects. I want to tell you one thing is I am good at all science subjects. We really should attend the high school together. Therefore, I can give you a hand in chemistry homework and projects. Let me come back to the blog now. I suggest you to put a comma in front of "and" because that is the gramma rule. And, again, Huiting, I can not figure out the last paragraph is your conclusion or not because it is long and I kind of thinking it is another body paragraph. ^.^阿伙https://www.blogger.com/profile/06458883628176417865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6408005209109774396.post-20191943297026779712010-10-06T18:07:43.519-07:002010-10-06T18:07:43.519-07:00Hey =]
I can really connect to your situation abou...Hey =]<br />I can really connect to your situation about reading a lot for your classes. That can be very long and stressful. I find your last paragraph strong because it connects to the whole concept of how to improve being happy in school. However, you forgot to put in a thesis, a statement that you are arguing for. As the last statement of your first paragraph you can write about how doing things you enjoy brings happiness in education. I suggest rereading your entry because there are a few grammar mistakes. I liked how you mentioned that math and science aren't the only two subjects that matter and that doing what you like would help you become engaged. To relate to that point you can connect it to the video we watched and it will make your point stronger.Jessica Lucerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06849819999846957795noreply@blogger.com